ok, i'm done. first of all, this is the first time i ever liked the result after using this technique, which requires a lot of brushstrokes and overlapping. i've tried this so manny times before but they all looked bad. but this one, i like it. i'm not as good as artists who only work with this technique though. i'll practice and learn.
well, her face is fairly long, yes. it's because i only focused on contrast and color choice -- which turned out to be okay. i like her hair, eyes, and lips.
when i first started drawing, i wanted naive, fragile, childish, and girlish atmosphere, but i guess the eyes turned it upside down. but i still think it's ok. i definitely need more practice.